Great poem. As mentioned by others before me you need to work on grammar, but don't worry I have that problem. I cannot spell even if my life depended on it. None of your errors were distracting or obvious. Except one. The like should be lowercase. As per visuals and style A.K.A the most important part of writing you did a wonderful job. The poem didn't drag on unlike this review and I could get into the mind of the character ( something to be proud of) Overall, a great poem.
Points: 36
Reviews: 57
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