Lenora742

Hey there! I wasn't sure what to expect when i clicked on this, but I was pleasantly surprised with your poem! I just wanted to share, what your poem means ...

Hello there! Thought I'd stop by and give you a review :) Firstly, I'd like to point out, there are quite a few grammatical errors, and I'll cover a few, ...

Hey there! I didn't read the first chapter to this (though I will when I'm done here), But I think this is very interesting so far. Some correction suggestions: "I ...

Hello there, Here to review your poem :) Overall, I like it. I didn't notice any grammar/spelling errors, so great job! It was a little short, but you got your ...

Hey there! So, I was kinda waiting for you to write more, because I really loved your first story! This definitely makes it easier to understand more about Jackie. Some ...

Hey there! So, I really love how you used all of the senses, very good way to help your reader visualize. I am a little confused though, as to what ...

Hey there! Just thought I'd stop by for a review! So, I won't take too long to tell you, that I really enjoyed reading this. I started almost 'singing' it ...

Erm, I'd firstly like to point out, that you knew you had several grammatical errors, but didn't bother to fix them yourself. If you knew it was sloppy, you could ...

Hey there! After reading this, I couldn't stop myself from writing a review! Your story is incredible, to say the least. I wasn't able to spot out any grammatical or ...

Hey there! I know you already have a few reviews, but I thought I'd give another :) Overall, I loved this story. When her and Jake started kissing and Tyler ...

Hello, This next addition to your amazing story, is simply incredible. It was a very interesting choice to give us a background story on Phil, and I'm so happy you ...

Hey there! Just thought I'd review this for ya' :) Overall, I love it. "Keep it all inside, know what to show and what to hide." This line is perfect ...

I appreciate the basic concept of your article here, but overall, I feel as though you didn't spend much time writing it. I've noticed the other reviewers already pointed out ...

Hey there! I'm so happy you wrote the next chapter to this chilling story! Overall, I loved it. It maintains that dark and eerie mood throughout, and i'm definitely satisfied ...

I really enjoyed reading this! The only thing I wanted to point out was, "The prince is not in gold." I think you meant to put "price" but i can't ...