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Hi, I like the idea you worked with here, but there are a few things to comment on. The whole, what I feel is too much of a happy ending, ...

Hey man, nice job on the poem in terms of punctuation and grammar etc. It works perfectly, and flows like a charm. However, perhaps I'm just an idiot but in ...

Hey newbie! (I'm a newbie too haha) Well done, you wrote his well, I got the chills reading it and almost wanted to stop because I was so freaked out. ...

Awwww that was such a romantic poem. Whether it was real or just a writing idea, you expressed your love for another very well. But.....there is always a but. :) ...

Really well done, I see where you got inspired by Oscar Wilde, which is saying something because he was a literary Genius. :) But may I just make on suggestion, ...

This was a relatively good piece man, but it left me with a few questions. Such as: What is a sliver? What exactly are you going on about? And, why ...

I was expecting more from this story. I liked that it was original but I didn't get that disturbing thrill that I anticipated. You need to add more in here, ...

Hmmmm interesting piece, but there were some things that annoyed me a bit. You seemed to think instead of "were", "was" applied to a sentence. E.g. "People around the main ...

Simply breathtaking.....well done! Today I was in one of those moods where reading one of those excessively long pieces would be torture. But this was perfect, I got to enjoy ...

A funny poem, very amusing. It's always good to meddle with the most innocent of topics, especially cans of tuna. Haha. But although the poem was impressive, it didn't always ...

This is an all you can read buffet of magnificent!! WELL DONE! I actually praise you for your originality, this is the most intriguing, unique love story I've ever read. ...

Look man, I admire you for writing a a story from a psychopath's perspective, I really do. I've tried it myself and it' tricky. What I mean to say is, ...

Hi Bud, I disagree with ignorance about the bold. I quite like it, in fact, I love it! It adds t the intensity and depth of the piece itself. Just ...

Nice poem man, it really captures what growing up can mean. Although, I feel that aging doesn't always have to be so dry and depressing. I mean, we all have ...

Brilliant. The rhyming is so clever, and sexy. This poem really speaks the truth, because no girl is just a slut because she is a slut. There is always a ...