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Re: I Take Responsibility....
Hi, Legy here. Wow, let me first just say, this was a brave topic to tackle. I don't understand what it's like to endure a situation such as this (hopefully ...
Feb 6, 2016 -
Re: Unambiguity
Wow. think suggesting the person whose perspective this poem comes from is feeling great ain is a huge understatement. It's angry, bitter, veangeful and violent. A really accurate way to ...
Feb 19, 2015 -
Re: Sacrifice
This poem is very depressing....but I guess that's the idea! I sincerely hope you aren't currently enduring such awful feelings, but if so seek guidance from a loved one or ...
Feb 19, 2015 -
Re: A Poem for the Old
Hi, Legy here, Darkly funny! I like it! My favourite genre of writing. It's great to focus on meaningful ideas without putting to much agony into it, and siding it ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: Tyrant
Wow, you really summed up the struggles of life in a clear cut, awesome way. I envisage a tyrant as someone who does not fit in; you know, doesn't adhere ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: Anti- Social Media
Hi, you make a lot of interesting points in your argumentative essay. I agree with basically all of them, however I guess depending on the individual the effects of social ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: See What I've Become
Wow, deep sh*t. The immensity of the troubled language you used was far from incredible. The context of the poem? Amazing. I'm getting that the perspective in which the poem ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: no more white women, i'm done (18+)
Beautiful language. You really know how to write with eloquence. This piece was great because it contained what I love; a bit of darkness! I really resonated with the atmosphere ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: Darkness Torn
This poem flows angelically. I loved the language, the rhythm and it's somber nature. This is the best piece of writing I have read all day, so thank you. You ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: Hatred
Hi, Legy here. Ok, I'm going to get straight to the point; this was not a poem. A poem needs to have spaces and at least some rhythm. I clicked ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: The Human Soul
Wow, that was superbly written, and got me gripping my seat. You know it's a good thriller when you are craving what comes next. But hang on, let me get ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: Gold Struck
Hey, I liked the story, it was entertaining, but I can't help but cringe at some of the inaccurate Australian references you made in the story. Question; are you an ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: shadows
Hey, Legy here. I have to say, at first u found it a little too dull for my liking, you sort of over described things a little too much. But ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: The Console
Wow....that story made me want to throw my computer out the window too. I love the concept! Very creative! You succeeded in sending shivers up my spine, I even found ...
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: Column
Hi, Legible here. I admire your ability to express; you do so beautifully...however, I feel like this story could have been better in poem form. I think deep ideas like ...
Jan 9, 2015
