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Re: Chapter 4
Ello, Im here to do a review. Feel free to tell me if i did anything wrong. Ok lets get right into it then!. My running turns to jogging shortly, ...
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Re: The Mighty Have Fallen- Chapter 2
Ello, Im here to do a review. Feel free to tell me if i did anything wrong . Ok lets get right into it then!. "Every little kid has something ...
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Re: Sick to My Stomach
Hello, sound of mind, leek here to review, If you don't disagree with what i said then tell me. So lets get right into the review!. "with every ache inside ...
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Re: I Strongly Dislike Poetry
Ello!, Leek here to review!!. feel free to tell me if you disagreed with my points. Ok lets go right into this. The sentences should be more spaced out for ...
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Re: Nana
Ello, Im here for a review, tell me if you disagreed with some of the points i made. Ok lets get down to business then!. "The young women" There is ...
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Re: She is Death Pt.10 - The Change
Ello!. Im here to do a review, feel free to tell me if this review was not good enough. So lets get right into this then!. Ill be reviewing the ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: Under the Table
Hey!. Its Leek here for the review! feel free to tell me if anything is wrong with my review. Lets get started. "in fact, she felt, she knew" The comma ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: My Zoo Adventure
Hey! Ahaskin welcome to YWS ill be here to review your work. so lets get right into the business "One of my memories that I will never forget is the ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: Starlight Chapter 5 (Part I)
Ello!. Im here to do a review!. Feel free to acknowledge any flaws in this review. Ill just get all the places i think should have been changed. "A young ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: Oren ~Three~
Hi!, Im here to do a review. Feel free to tell me if i did something wrong. So lets get right into it then!. "He had...grown on me this past ...
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Re: Dad
Hi, Harry576 im here to do a review!. Feel free to tell me if this is wrong. Ok lets get down to business "Some dads are cool, Others are cruel. ...
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Re: The Reckoning
Hey!, Im here to do a review please feel free to tell me if this is wrong. Yep, Lets get down to the action "Beyond that he could see the ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: The Dying Sun [NOVEL] Chapter 2
Hi, Im here to do a review im just coming back from a hiatus so feel free to criticize my review. Ok lets get down to business. "A girl with ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: What It Is to Be Özlem
Ok i Just want to say this really confused me are you a different language because its awesome style of speaking and writing and completely shows that if this was ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: Bastion: Barracuda - Chapter Four - Chop Shop
Oooooo Im loving this new chapter its so nice and intruging i must say you must have your work cut out ok lets get down to business Firstly The First ...
Dec 23, 2015