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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction
    Re: Chapter 4

    Ello, Im here to do a review. Feel free to tell me if i did anything wrong. Ok lets get right into it then!. My running turns to jogging shortly, ...

    Jun 3, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction
    Re: The Mighty Have Fallen- Chapter 2

    Ello, Im here to do a review. Feel free to tell me if i did anything wrong . Ok lets get right into it then!. "Every little kid has something ...

    Jun 3, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Sick to My Stomach

    Hello, sound of mind, leek here to review, If you don't disagree with what i said then tell me. So lets get right into the review!. "with every ache inside ...

    Jun 3, 2016

  • Poetry » Humor, Satire
    Re: I Strongly Dislike Poetry

    Ello!, Leek here to review!!. feel free to tell me if you disagreed with my points. Ok lets go right into this. The sentences should be more spaced out for ...

    Jun 3, 2016

  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror
    Re: Nana

    Ello, Im here for a review, tell me if you disagreed with some of the points i made. Ok lets get down to business then!. "The young women" There is ...

    Jun 3, 2016

  • Short Story » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: She is Death Pt.10 - The Change

    Ello!. Im here to do a review, feel free to tell me if this review was not good enough. So lets get right into this then!. Ill be reviewing the ...

    Jun 2, 2016

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Under the Table

    Hey!. Its Leek here for the review! feel free to tell me if anything is wrong with my review. Lets get started. "in fact, she felt, she knew" The comma ...

    Jun 2, 2016

  • Other » Action / Adventure, Other
    Re: My Zoo Adventure

    Hey! Ahaskin welcome to YWS ill be here to review your work. so lets get right into the business "One of my memories that I will never forget is the ...

    Jun 2, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy
    Re: Starlight Chapter 5 (Part I)

    Ello!. Im here to do a review!. Feel free to acknowledge any flaws in this review. Ill just get all the places i think should have been changed. "A young ...

    Jun 2, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Re: Oren ~Three~

    Hi!, Im here to do a review. Feel free to tell me if i did something wrong. So lets get right into it then!. "He had...grown on me this past ...

    Jun 2, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Dad

    Hi, Harry576 im here to do a review!. Feel free to tell me if this is wrong. Ok lets get down to business "Some dads are cool, Others are cruel. ...

    Jun 2, 2016

  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Reckoning

    Hey!, Im here to do a review please feel free to tell me if this is wrong. Yep, Lets get down to the action "Beyond that he could see the ...

    Jun 2, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Romantic
    Re: The Dying Sun [NOVEL] Chapter 2

    Hi, Im here to do a review im just coming back from a hiatus so feel free to criticize my review. Ok lets get down to business. "A girl with ...

    Jun 2, 2016

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: What It Is to Be Özlem

    Ok i Just want to say this really confused me are you a different language because its awesome style of speaking and writing and completely shows that if this was ...

    Dec 23, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: Bastion: Barracuda - Chapter Four - Chop Shop

    Oooooo Im loving this new chapter its so nice and intruging i must say you must have your work cut out ok lets get down to business Firstly The First ...

    Dec 23, 2015


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