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Laurenh6

Laurenh6

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Beyond -- Prologue

    Wow! I've just read through this and I think it's genuinely amazing ! You can seriously write! Loved it! So basically I'm going to do you a review and list ...

    Aug 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Rooster in Bakeries, Illegal in Massachusetts? No Kidding!

    Hello! I thought this looked rather awesome actually xD! The title and description were so wacky and crazy - love that kinda thing! So I thought I'd give it a ...

    Aug 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: The Golden Boy

    Hey there! Thought I'd review this.. Looked interesting so I'm going to list my observations as I read along. It's just my personal opinion so I hope you don't take ...

    Aug 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Outcasts

    Hello I'm going to give you a reviewww! The title really caught my attention -very short and sweet so I thought I'd give it a read. I'm going to list ...

    Aug 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Cave - Chapter I - The Operation

    Hey there! This looked interesting so I thought I'd give it a reviewwww :D . So can I just say you've done an awesome job of surprising me on this ...

    Aug 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: The Blub Monster

    Hey there! I clicked on this because I saw it under the horror category - gotta love a scary story xD .. and the title and description really caught my ...

    Aug 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Poisoned Apple

    Wow this is probably one of the best poems I have read on this site! Clearly, this is well thought-out the structure of the poem flows beautifully and the rhyme ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Thunder and Ice Chapter 1 ~ The Lightning Talon

    Hey there Felistia! :D Again, just going to record observations as I read along - I hope I can help :) ! 1) Paragraph one you've mentioned "wing beats" - ...

    Aug 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Thunder and Ice Prologue ~ A Heart of Ice

    Hey there! :D Basically, I'm going to read through and lost my observations of this piece and then I'll share it with you :) - hope I can help :D ...

    Aug 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Literature, Spiritual Re: Annabel (In Progress)

    Hi there! Here's th review you wanted :D .. The title at first made me think of that horror movie - ya know about the doll ? (If you've heard ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Spirit Born

    Hi there ! Basically I'm going to do you a review and record my observations as I read along :) 1)Should it be "along the rocky mountain path" - first ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Crunch Time

    Hey there! I found this a really interesting piece of writing and I liked how you slowly revealed the exam situation . At first I was slightly confused as to ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Lyrical Re: A Morning Visit (in progress)

    Hey there! I thought this was an interesting plot line - certainly nothing like anything I've read before so you should be proud of that and keep at it :) ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The Rotation of Turners

    Hello , I thought this was intriguing to read - still not really sure what's going on xD. You draw the reader in from the beginning with your first paragraph ...

    Jul 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Trans (Introduction)

    Hello! I thought this was really interesting - I don't know if this is a first hand experience or what but it really interests me to see things from such ...

    Jul 23, 2016


I will not allow my life's light to be determined by the darkness around me.
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