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Laure

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  • Short Story » General, General Re: You

    Hello, this is a really interesting story which awesome means I actually spent about one minute to figure out what was going on. I don't know what to say about ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: One Breath

    Oh...this is really sad. It really is but I know how you feel. Truly. Every one of these stanzas appealed to me and held my breathless, I'm afraid this is ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Dad?

    1. We can't communicate, I flinch every time he raises a hand or raise his voice. Shadows left over from childhood memories. 2. He's a dealer. 3. I don't know. ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Past, Present, Future

    Hai Finn, Laure here for a very brief review. I can say without shame this is one the most insightful poem about the past, present and future because yes, all ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Other Re: There Is No Escape Now (Fix You-Coldplay Parody)

    xD. I just had to review this, I mean I love Fix You by Coldplay, but hey, who doesn't love a good parody? This is a surprisingly interesting read, although ...

    Mar 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dedicated to you

    Hello, Laure here for a review! This is certainly an interesting way to contrast your poems, I will firstly point out the pros and cons and then some advice on ...

    Mar 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Supernatural, General Re: The Devil Inside: Hollow Heart

    Hai! Citrus17, Laure here for a review! So, I think I will review in terms of pros and cons, and then I will end with some advice. I generally liked ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Taking Me Under

    Hey Purple! Laure here for a review! This is a really interesting poem, and a very metaphorical one too. The whole poem in fact seems like a massive metaphor for ...

    Mar 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Daisy

    Hi, Brittany. Laure here for a review! This is a really interesting poem, I'm not just using that as a placeholder but as in this is a really interesting poem. ...

    Mar 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Through the journey of a lifetime

    Ello, here as requested. So, since this is a relatively short poem I'm going to give you an overall idea on what I think is good and what needs to ...

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Closure 2

    Hello, Laure here on review day! This is a really special poem, I say that because it really resembles the setting of a prose. A very lyrical prose I suppose. ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Type of Jam

    *claps**claps**claps* So, I love this villanelle, because they are so difficult to write since I can never come up with one that actually makes sense. I've got to pay my ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Tears Of A Pathetic Clown

    Wow.... Hello, happy review day! Laure the icicle here for a review! This is. Without doubt the best title relating poem ever. I love how you every line in your ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Life and Death Go Hand in Hand

    Hey Chole, Laure here for a review. I have to say, I am impressed by this short story. And that is something I don't usually say. Your story has managed ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Now and Forever

    Hello, Laure here to review on this killer night! I like this poem, is simple, romantic but it has a touch of sadness to it as well. You've done a ...

    Jan 17, 2014


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