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Re: This World We Live In
Hey there! LastSilverH3R0 here to review your work! Wow. I don't know much to say, except that you are pretty much spot on. I am a huge fan of philosophy, ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: Am I a fool? Well seriously?
Hey, LastSilverH3R0 here to review you! First of all I would like to say that I thought that this was pretty funny! Not where I just say "lol" or something ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: Pieces of you..
Hey there, LastSilverH3R0 here to review you! First off, I would like to say that this is an amazing piece. It combines feelings that most everyone feels, including love and ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: How to be a Spy
Hey there, Lastsilverh3r0 here to review you! First of all I would like to say that this is a very cleverly written story. I liked the real emotions that you ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: life is beautiful
Hello there! LastSilverH3r0 here to review you! Well, I'm not one to usually attack a song based on the essence of it, because it comes from your thoughts and your ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Prayer of Modernity
Hey there, Lastsilverh3r0 here to review you! Now I am a Christian, so I'm not sure what all I can say about the poem in certain contexts that won't be ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Quotes
Hey there, Lastsilverh3r0 here to review you! First of all I see that this is your first poem. I know that you might have put a lot of thought into ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Chairs
Hey, lastsilverh3r0 here to review you! I would like to say that this is quite the song you have here. I read it in a kind of angry rock-style tune, ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: Just Look.
Hello there! Doug here to review you! First of all I would like to say that this is a fantastic poem. I really like all of the metaphors that you ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: Thermal Expansion (The Burning Man)
Hey, Lastsilverh3r0 here to review you! This was a very interesting lyric that you wrote. It sounds pretty professional, the only part that I thought was strange was the areas ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: Miranda (Part 1)
Hey, Lastsilverh3r0 here to review you! I really liked this poem. I feel like it had the perfect amount of feeling to it that most people who are separated from ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: Reality vs Words
Hey there, LastSilverH3r0 here to review you! Well, I really found this interesting, and I actually looked deep into it. Now, first off, I'd like to say the first sentence ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Letter From Exile
Hey, Doug here to review you. I really liked your poem here. It wasn't complicated, even though you used the olden style writing. I felt like it was deep, and ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Montague's Last
Hey, Doug here to give you a review! First of all let me say that I do actually really enjoy this. I feel like you're really good at capturing the ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Days of Gold Gone By: Ep.Eight
Howdy, Happy Review Day! Well down to business! I really enjoyed this, especially the beginning. I felt like it was really descriptive and well written. You are a fantastic author, ...
Nov 24, 2013