i simply loved your poem! i don't know whether this is your first attempt at archaic writing, but this is really good. the exiled person would be one who doesn't complain about his position, one who simply seeks company, who wants to be reminded of home but wasn't want anyone else to suffer with him.
especially these words, " do not seek me, thou art far better off there...... nay, thou art far better with a roof over thine head... a quill to paint it in my mind, lest ever i should forget"
this brings out his feelings and emotions so well!! i would like to see more such poems, hardly anyone can make a archaic poem so beautiful
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