Everyone thinks that they are the best. Though no one else agrees, they are all right.
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I think I get it. You are trying to say that it seems like everyone thinks they have the whole truth or correct facts. But in reality, they are all technically correct because they all have a small piece of what's really there. Everyone is amazing at that one piece that they were given to expand and turn into something amazing. But to expand that piece, they have to see that you have to come together with others to make life whole. I think that you should expand on this little piece, because I think it would be absolutely amazing to see your complete passion and feeling towards it. Expand on it. I want to see what piece you hold.
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First of all I see that this is your first poem. I know that you might have put a lot of thought into this into making it look clever, but to most people it might just seem that you wasted your points in putting this up. My advice would be to further ponder the subject and add more details to the poem. Describe what you feel about "everyone thinks that they are the best" and its contradiction "though no one else agrees." Explain that, and how it pieces together, and I feel like it could look a lot more cleverly written. I did understand it, but the way it is written it might look like you just don't know what you're talking about. I think that if it were me I would write it up in a way where I look very professional with it, so that it adds that factor of credibility to it. I see what you did here, but there's always room for improvement. Just keep working!
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This isn't a story, isn't a poem, isn't an essay, isn't an project. Just a quote. It's really, really refreshing to go to a quote as happy as this. My day hasn't been the best, and I think you have just made my day. Like, literally, you have made my day. I thank you. I love the meaning behind this. Everyone is the best, this is true. This is true because of the fact that anything but the best is just a matter of opinion. Just a pesky opinion. Great quote.. Really.. Great quote. Thank you for making my day.
Thank you for that review. I too, was having a bad day and your review just made my day.