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I gotta say, if you were shooting to make a friend of yours feel guilting in possibly the hardest time of her life, you're no friend. Thats one of the ...

I love it!! Its very snippy, in an 18th century, 'I'm better than you are' kind of way.

Well it sounds like you're talking about an actual red ball, and it breaks the illusion that this red ball is a metephore for another person. We, and by we ...

Affirmative action has already been passed, it was a part of the civil rights movement years and years ago. Now theres a bit of hubub about getting it removed.

Reichieru, she hasn't gotten angry. Psylinx has. Its HER poetry, why does SHE have to understand HIM? That seems backwards.

Hilarious because its weird al.

“Why-” He pulled out his communication device and pressed the only available button. A clear pleasant voice responded. “Name please.” “Engineer's office” “One moment... authorization ple

Yes, the exterminate at the end, which I didn't actually read, just acknowleged the existance of, is horribly repedative. I'm going to be honest, it sucks. Not the whole thing, ...

Humerous to say the least. I don't think this really qualifies as poetry, and I'm sure theres some rule about posting so much all at once.

I don't have any constructive imput to say other than I enjoyed this. The first four lines sets everything up exellently, and is possibly my favorite bit.

Um... ok? I don't get it. Again, this is too short to be interesting. This is a good starting point, but where does it go? What is it for?

I didn't get the second stanza. Its all good up until those last three lines. Before that, everything is great, and making sense, but that last bit throws me off.

Its too short to be interesting, and we get to the end and it isn't funny. In the context of a conversation this would be hilarious.

I don't know if you were being sarcastic or not, but like I said, its an interesting idea. It just needs to be taken further. Don't put yourself down like ...

This is sweet. It lacks a bit in poetic style, but it more than makes up for it in the simple harmony that one could be left with.