Published March 24, 2006
I like my man as
I do my huevos:
Over-easy, on hash,
And two at a time.
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I wanna be a rockstar / but I ain't got what it takes. :)
Hah.
i really enjoyed this.
you dirty girl!
How is it homoerotic? She's a girl.
Do you use the word "huevos" on purpose? Because it makes the poem slightly homosexual since "huevos" is what is used for "testicles" in the Mexican world.
But still... slightly funny. Just a little homoerotic.
Haha. Nice. A little ditty more than anything else.
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Humerous to say the least. I don't think this really qualifies as poetry, and I'm sure theres some rule about posting so much all at once.