Published March 28, 2006
“A concrete wall of massive destruction”
That’s what he considered himself.
So ready to achieve and willing to succeed
“A huge disgrace to the human race”
That’s what others considered him.
So ready to be punched and fall to the ground
Inside of everyone hides a little nut
"His nut’s on the outside..."
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I think you need to add puncuation. It will look neater,more organised, and better written.
Other than that, I liked it. I don't know why, I just enjoyed reading it.
Jearjioe
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I liked this, cute though... Weird Al is humerous, and would enjoy this poem... if I thought he had the capacity to be able to understand it
I liked this, and I can't explain why. I apologize for just...you know...giving you a useless comment and wasting a little smitch of internet space.
Hilarious because its weird al.