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LakeOfCancer

Being A Leader Doens't Mean You Have to Be Rude To Others To Get Them To Follow You. It's That You Give Them A Good Example To Follow And Look Up To.

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: In The Mind of Suicide

    This is exactly how I feel. You described it so well...I know it's bad to say, but I plan on starting to cut tonight. I'm scared. But I cant fix ...

    Feb 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Wildest Dreams.

    I used to LOOOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEE Taylor Swift! I mean, I still do! But This was fantastic! I love how you tell a story of a girl who met a guy so ...

    Feb 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Autumn Chapter 5

    OHMYGOD! Not only did this make me feel all sorts of emotions, but it also made me think, how would Autumn's siblings be DEAD!? I mean like, maybe they were ...

    Feb 13, 2018
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: [Review Contest] The Beauty of Writing Badly

    Hey there! Lake here for another good review, hoping to get my team a gold medal! So, I think you picked a good topic to write about. Especially since this ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Again

    I think my favorite part was wen you went back and forth with yourself, saying it is, it isn't, it, then you say, isn't it. It's not because you made ...

    Feb 7, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Autumn Chapter 4

    OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ROMANTIC TENSION!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN SENSE ITTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!! AND I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! While this chapter may have been a little bit shorter, it was still gr

    Feb 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Sickness

    YOU DID ITTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And by the way, I'm sorry this happened to you. Your dad shouldn't have bothered, he should've left you alone. SO I'm sorry. But you made this ...

    Feb 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: lungs crushed hearts crushed im not breathing but im alive

    Kara....ya know what I said last Friday, about what I wanted to do? This is how I felt. I know that you think everything is total s*** right now, but ...

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Autumn Ch. 3

    HOLY CRAP! SHE ISN'T ACTUALLY THE DAUGHTER OF LILY AND RED!? OH DAMN! Okay, so I loved this, so much detail and I felt as if I were Autumn!XD But ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part Two

    I loved this much so, in a way of telling you what you shouldn't and should fix, I shall write this review! My name is Lake, you shall find pleased ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 5 (rough draft)

    Hi! Lake here for a review, hopefully to keep the Red Pandas in first place! So, the first thing I noticed about Alex, or Alexander, whatever you want to call ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: 1680 words from page 275 of ma book

    Holy crap....this was absolutely...there isn't a good enough word to describe it! Okay, so I'm interested in your book now....but I'm not sure if you'll publish it. So I'll just ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: oh, Jackie

    I found this as beautiful, so congratulations! The one thing I found interesting more than anything else in this, was the fact that she was telling the narrator that they ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Time Poetry

    I loved every moment of time that you described in this poem. Each time and scene captivates the imagery of a child, and the detail of the world. Both stunning. ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Other » Realistic, Literature Re: something about the world

    I was moved when I read this, so that should tell you that you did brilliantly! First of all, the first story: I think you showed lots of passion in ...

    Jan 28, 2018


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