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Re: A satire of Satire
This is such a coincidence! In my Creative Writing class, we were learning about satire this week and now we have to create a satire about any topic of our ...
Sep 15, 2018 -
Re: The New Hero: Chapter Three
This is amazing! *can't breathe from all the amazingness* Now yeah, there are a few minor errors, but I'm up early today and I just don't have it in me ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: Farewell..
NO! DON'T YOU DARE LEAVE! IT IS NOT FAIR TO YOUR FRIENDS! I KNOW THAT YOU MEAN WELL SO THAT WAY YOU ARE ABLE TO RESTORE YOUR NATURAL ENERGY OR ...
May 11, 2018 -
Re: Wow...
Yeah, I think the same as everyone else! This girl is lucky to have you like her! And also, @LadyShadows is kinda right. In certain places it didn't sound right, ...
Mar 9, 2018 -
Re: Blood
Just...don't do it. Try to think of something, ANYTHING at this point, that makes you happy. And NO! CUTTING DOES NOT MAKE YOU HAPPY! WHAT IT DOES IS MAKE YOU ...
Mar 7, 2018 -
Re: Washing Machine Dreams
I have never heard of a pantoum! SO now that I'm interested, why not write a review!?XD Lake here for another review, hopefully to keep The Blue Fish in the ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: rainy storm
This is very good, and being inspired by your little sister's poem when she was five !? That's freaking awesome! Lake here for another review, and hopefully to keep The ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Rise - Chapter 2
This. Was. Spectacular! Lake here for a review, and hopefully to keep The Blue Fish in the lead! So the first thing I noticed is that you have an expert ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: The Cat
From what I'm guessing.....he died? Hey there! Lake here for another review, hopefully to keep The Blue Fish in the lead! So at first I thought that you would rhyme ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: I want to live.
Hey there! Lake here for another review, and also to hopefully keep The Blue Fish in the lead! So I only have a few things to comment on because you ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: "I'm OK." A Poem
Hello! Lake here for a review, hopefully to keep The Blue Fish in the lead! So what I noticed first is the fact that you used 'ok' quite often. I ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: A message from space
This definitely got me going! Lake here to keep The Blue Fish in first place! So first off, I wanted to say, I can see why this was the winning ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Lyrical Chapter Two: "Here Comes the Sun"- The Beatles
I think this is a really good chapter, you described how Annie was feeling throughout the entire thing and the fact that her and Michael have a type of relationship ...
Feb 20, 2018 -
Re: word vomit
I feel the same way Ash. I've been trying to keep it in But lately, if you've noticed, like Kara has, that I've begun swearing on other people's walls. It's ...
Feb 20, 2018 -
Re: The New Hero: Chapter One
This was definitely intriguing, I can't wait for you to publish a new chapter of this! (: But there was one part that confused me. In paragraph 6. The second ...
Feb 18, 2018