LadySpark

Hi friend! Here for a quick review :) First off, LOVE the recorded version. I hope you continue to do that, because it's excellent and really adds color and depth ...

hey ladybug! let's dive in

Hi Alice! Saw that you were looking for some eyes on this, so I thought I'd pop over and give it a look! I really like what you're playing with ...

Okay, I am obsssesssssseddddd with this. First of all, I'm in the process of learning french and this just scratched an itch I didn't know I needed scratched! I've been ...

Hi Lim! Thought I'd grab the first review on this one. I love the imagery in this poem. It's so crisp and clean and reminds me of an afternoon on ...

Hi foxmaster, here to do a quick little review for you. It seems that YWS is having a very nostalgic few weeks because I've seen several different poems speculating on ...

Hello Ari! I'm Spark and I'm here to review your poem today :) I really like where this poem is going and I think you have some really solid stuff ...

Hi there! I haven't read your other chapters of this, so I'm just going to give you a few thoughts I notice while I read this chapter. “And who decided ...

Spark here again! oh wow I love this one even more than fairy dust, excellent, excellent, excellent. I think you can definitely tell you've been drawing inspiration from childhood memories ...

Hello! Okay, so this is absolutely excellent and I love the graphic behind it and just the way that you set up the "world" for us to read this poem ...

I don't know why you think this is mediocre, it's quite excellent! I love the phrasing and the nihilistic overarching tone of the whole poem. My favorite type of poetry! ...

Wow. This is phenomenal. Your imagery is so simplistic, but you really hit home with some great phrases that just capture a very specific, clear picture. I kind of just ...

Hey there! So tbh I was slightly taken aback by my title for my napo being the first line in this, but after I realized what was going on, I ...

hey love. it's been awhile. stanza one is really strong, but idk if you really need the 'and praised the sun...' line. it kind of detracts from your flow? it ...

I'm not going to comment on the topic you've chosen, since it's very political, so we'll just focus on the poem itself, yeah? :) An innocence awaits, Innocent, dear. That ...