Howdy hey! Gengar here to write a review!
I really like things that are retrospective (like the channels Izzzyzzz and Dream Jelly), so I thought this poem was neat! I’m not even that old but I still look back on my childhood like “man… it feels like it was yesterday!”
As other people have said, I think you could use more description.
And what do children do now?
and play video games
Where did it all go wrong?
I don’t think “watching youtube / and playing video games / with zombies” necessarily seems bad. To prove your point a little more, you might want to add some description. What kind of youtube videos are kids watching? Are they watching mindless stuff on Youtube Kids or videos not meant for kids? And what about the video games? Are they extremely violent and toxic?
I hope you have a good day!