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Hi tylyn! I figured since I entered your contest I may as well review a chapter!!!! Jonah examined the toe of his shoe as though it was one of the ...

Hello! Here to review.... t was the sweat between Sahib and his mattress that woke him this morning. One eye pinched, the other open, he focused on the ceiling. It ...

Hi Mick! Here to review Chapter 1!!!! She was a very nice lady and widely accepted in our small town. She never yelled and was very understanding. A little to ...

Hi Mick! Here as requested. I'm going to try to get as much as I can done of this novel, because I leave for the beach, and probably won't be ...

Hi! Here to review!!!! 9 and ¾. Should be nine and three-quarters I wonder who she is… Lily thought to herself It should be in italics “Hey, Pandora,” Seth said ...

Hey there! Here to review. The information in the book I just saw shocked both of us. Already, second sentance, I can tell your going to be telling, not showing. ...

Hi There! Here to review! He was luckily was in the same wing of the school as me couple of hours later, the sun was up. Avery lay next to ...

HI! pointe here as requested. LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED!!! I’m Zhayanne Chelzy WHOA. thats a big,compicated name. Especially for the beginning of a book. Its a little off putting. ...

HEYY! I said I would review, and here I am! Plugged in and hooked up to tubes , W ires running underneath the your skin , a puppet tied to ...

hai Tinker bell! (Can I call you that? I think its a good nickname for you..) :) I am Pointe, and I'm here to review you today! Hanging eerily way ...

hai I am here to review your 'short' story. Before I start, we need to talk about length, you normally want your short story, to be no-less than 1,000 words. ...

hai Tyler! So I am sooo going to review you today! Romance is my favorite genre. So this is gonna be right up my alley :) straight from his gut ...

hai Jazzyyyyyyyy! Here to review! with a friend, drunk or high or maybe just crazy, hahahahahahahaaaaaa millions of stories, millions of secrets two millions really close together. how bout hundreds ...

hai Justagirl! I'm here for your review! narrow metal board where are they? I reached the top of the half-made building and stopped. I guess the day I’d have to ...

hai! I'm Pointe and I'll be doing your review! So first of, WELCOME! You'll love the site, if you have ANY questions, just go here: :) Okay! lets get started!! ...