LadyPurple

Goodness, I have the same problem. I wanna post edited versions of stuff but I'm afraid to! :P

That was clever lol. XD

Never mind. Wrong thing.

This was...this was deleted. I took the story down so I'm not sure what you're all talking about...

*possessive. Sorry:P

"For example here, at first I was thinking that the window was filling like a pit." Hehe yeah I'll work on that :) thanks guys!

"For example here, at first I was thinking that the window was filling like a pit." Hehe yeah I'll work on that :) thanks guys!

I didn't split it into paragraphs because something weird on the site won't allow it (I know, it's driving me insane!) :P and thanks for the review:P I'm working on ...

I am not at all sure why I can't edit this properly. It's not supposed to be just a huge chunk of words like this...

That is so sweet! I almost cried. You, sir, will be a great father one day.

This poem has a very true nd obvious meaning. I can tell that either you or someone close to you is going through this. Glad you can vent it out ...

Wow. Awesome. But you left out an apostrophe (might be spelled wrong...) in "I'm" where you put "Im. That's all I can see, really. Thisis dark but yet it's cool:) ...

:) thanks, you people!

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A light humming whispers in my ear as the old Polyphon cranks up. I was about to give up on it when a soft, melancholy tone whipped out against the ...