LadyMysterio

Ah yes, i noticed that, if it doesn't fit don't worry about it!

WHOA................... plz tag me i need to know what happenes, great hook btw. -Lady Mysterio

oh guess it worked,

@everlight I don't know how to tag some one but lets see if this works...

Thank you very much! I don't get offened when my storys are picked apart. Its the only way the story will get better!. I will work on my emotion etc. ...

YES THANK YOU I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE!( first comment) LOL(second comment)

Hello Stellar Jay. Heres that review I promised. Honestly this is very well written, and there are no grammar or spelling mistake I can find. I like how you add ...

aww glad it made your day!

Saw the words detective and mystery and death, and clicked on this faster than Petro Maximoff. Can't wait for the next part!

well by horror I meant, like vampires and monsters, yeah now spooky stuff. I guess it isn't horror tho.

Also you mind if i use the sentence you did as am example...... I I did I would change it a bit, but i still wanted to ask

haha thank you so much, it seems every chapter, there are more errors, this is the reason I am on YWS.

Awesome thank you so much. I am still trying to figure out writing fight scenes and your commentary has helped a lot.

@dreamy I know you are curious about what happens next so I though I would tag you.

Cool Essay, One thing that came into my mind while reading was something my chemistry teacher talked about in school. She said that there is a there is theory that ...