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Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 7.3
Hello! Lady Mysterio Here With a review! Very nice story, I might have to go back and read the rest of the chapters. Every time I read the word 'Buck' ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Chapter two (A Fight for Freedom)
Hello! I am here with a review! This is a very cool story, reminds me of Star Wars. I also like your choice of names. I love the description of ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: A Scandal in Gotham #1
Hello, Lady Mysterio here to review! I am more of a Marvel fan, but I like DC too. AND I am a big fan of Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson. ...
Jan 22, 2020 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 19.2
Hello, Lady Mysterio with a review here! First off I like how you start the chapter off on a negative note then end off on a positive note. The descriptive ...
Jan 21, 2020 -
Re: Entry one/?: Little Miss Horror Show
Hello! Lady Mystery here with a review This is cool, I assume that its a book written through the character journal entries, cool. Ther are quite a few spelling mistakes ...
Jan 21, 2020 -
Re: Wish I Was Home ~ Chapter One ~ The Flight
Hello! First off nice intro. As I started reading I actually almost told Quinn that even though he is going to visit crazy relatives, on the positive side he going ...
Jan 4, 2020 -
Re: Rewrite The Stars-Featuring StarLord & Gamora
Hello Queen of the World! It's you monarchy friend Lady Mysterio here. Goodness I almost started crying. It makes me want to write one about Hawkeye and Black Widow, not ...
Dec 14, 2019 -
Re: Midnight Doctor Ch.2
OK I Am now loving this story! I love how you really let us into is head with his thought and feelings. Hopefully this doesn't ruin the story for you ...
Nov 30, 2019 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows Chapter 5
Seems I am the first person to review this. I like the emotion in this story, especially physical gestures such as looking down or twiddling one's thumbs. Alrighty, let's dive ...
Nov 27, 2019 -
Re: Midnight Doctor Ch.1
Hey cool story, I don't usually read horror type stuff, but I'll give it a go. I Like the descpritions in here, It creates a good word picture. I found ...
Nov 27, 2019 -
Re: .
This story is soo sweet! I finally got around to reviewing this. Haha I like how you intergrate some of their background relationship when johnny is taking about her being ...
Nov 12, 2019 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 19.2
Hello it's me again, this is the best chapter I have read o fthis so far. The only thing I found that could be changed was in this sentence. If ...
Nov 11, 2019 -
Re: The War Machine-Intro
This is so cool! I want to be an actress (I’d love to be a marvel villain someday) I have always wondered how movie scripts work, and I get it ...
Oct 27, 2019 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows Chapter 4
Yay! Next chapter! You are good at writing fight scenes. I loved the suspense when Rachel spooked Richard. There are a lot of 'R' names in this, and it gets ...
Oct 24, 2019 -
Re: The Vampire And The Hybrid-Prologue:An Understanding
Hey, I can’t wait to read this! This is a good hook it really makes the reader want to read more. I’d like to point out a few spelling mistakes ...
Oct 21, 2019
