LadyFreeWill

Woo! This is off to a good start! There were a few errors that I caught - quotation marks missing at the end of a quote, a few present-tense verbs ...

Hey there, Atticus. I'm TSM and I am here to dump harsh judgement on you. Let's first keep in mind that your 'Blue Oyster Cult' influence means squat to me, ...

Hm... Well, first of all, I don't agree with your other reviewers. They obviously can't understand what is not shoved into their faces. I liked how you put being emo ...

So, usually I don't really read Twilight fanfictions, but hey, I decided to check this one out, and I found myself a bit curious about what was going on. Like ...

Okay, this was quite interesting. At first, I was a bit confused about the 'I'm her creator' part, but then I realised that it must have been something relating to ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing your poem! Let's get started! First of all, I want to assure you that this was a very nice poem. Some of the poetic rhythm ...

I have no idea why, but I find this to be one of the cutest poems I have ever read. Maybe it's that bee. You made him/her(?) sound so completely ...

You seem like a pretty competent writer and maybe this was done on purpose, but why not capitalize the 'I's? I wasn't too crazy about this whole poem (it seemed ...

Hey! TSM, here to review! Here is one correction I would make: Love not me for comely grace, or for the way your blood will blaze when you caress my ...

Hello! I'll be reviewing! Red font = changes I have made. Onward! A lot goes down in this place. People stuff coins 'n dollar bills down my throat and expect ...

Hello! I'll be reviewing your article today. Red font represents changes I have made. Here I sit as your last breath has been taken. Gone are the days filled with ...

Hey, I'll be reviewing you today! Bold = things I have changed, and red = awkward phrases I am not sure how you wanted, so I will not change. Let's ...

Hellos! This is TheScratchMan, and I will be reviewing your article today. Things in red font are changes I have made that make sense to ME. I hate what I ...

Hi! I think you should use this poem for that scholarship thing you're doing. I'm sure that you've already taken some of the suggestions made in the other comments, but ...

Alright! An excerpt! Red signals changes to be made. I spent the whole night ranting about the horrors I had just witnessed, my voice loud and echoing within the walls ...