LadyBug

I really enjoyed this! The first part where she jumped into the broken glass made me cringe and made me want to read more at the same time. I think ...

Woah! I think this poem is a deep work of art. You have worded this so well that I felt what you meant. It was a sharp shock. The line: ...

I liked this. If I said no to someone and they said 'why not,' I would tell them: No is a complete sentence. It needs no justification or explanation. If ...

This is a very relatable poem. The lines: Clinging to the memories of out childhood, and love All of the stories where we push and shove. Was so well written ...

Hello, I saw this in the Green Room and I don't mknow why nobody has reviewed it yet. This is what I think: Woah. You put so much detail into ...

I enjoyed this poem. You described it so well that I could practically see its beauty. I don't know if you mean for this to be a metaphor or not, ...

Deep. This poem was well named because we all feel like that some days. I could feel the time and effort you put into this poem and it has paid ...

I enjoyed this and I would HATE if that happened to me. I think the story really flowed (other than a few choppy sentences I saw) and I don't know ...

I loved it! I do think some sentences were choppy and in some parts it didn't flow but other than that this is amazing. I hope you write mores stories ...

I think we feel peer pressure in our everyday lives. There is a good sort of peer pressure and a bad sort. The good kind is when your friend encourages ...

Likes: I like how it's in a first person narrative. That is striking. I always like how your writing captures my feelings and this genuinely made me feel. I love ...

Chilling..... Really chilling. I loved Owen because he is unlike other horror/thriller story heroes. He is the villain. That was quite an unexpected ending too. I love all the minor ...

First of all, I like the cute, airy feel of this poem. It is a really creative - one of a kind kinda poem and I thought it was very ...

I love the description of this poem and the way it flows when you read it aloud. The rhyme scheme doen't completely work but this is an interesting piece all ...

Haunting! I loved it. The twist was incredible and it left chills up my spine. I want to know more about Reverend Green and his "friends." I love the little ...