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Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 3
Heyo! It is I, Jade. Now, just my overall thoughts are: I see one or two looking for the right word grammar mistakes. I also didn't grasp the real point ...
Jun 22, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 2
Berty (your new nn) So, I'm sorry but I'm on a time crunch and can only give my overall thoughts. If you want me to expand/elaborate on anything I said ...
Jun 21, 2019 -
Re: Doppelganger
Wesh! It's Jade and I'm just going to give this a quick review! I'm tired. I don't know what the upside down quotation marks mean, but I suggest going through ...
Jun 21, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
Wesh! It's Jade. When I review, you may call me Professor Jade XD. OK, so my reviewing style is to go through line-by-line and give my thoughts. You do NOT ...
Jun 19, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hi, Im just going to give this my overall thoughts. Maybe put more detail into the characters and descriptions. The flow is pretty wacky so try ti keep it consistent. ...
Jun 19, 2019 -
Re: Believing in wisdom
Wesh! I'm Jade you know that lol and I'm just going to give my thoughts on this :D! The title caught my attention so here we are! I am struck ...
Jun 18, 2019 -
Re: Files
Wesh, I'm just going to give this my overall thoughts! I like the meaning of this poem, but I feel you could've worded it better. I think the flow is ...
Jun 17, 2019 -
Re: Sea of Mind- A rhyming poem
hey! So, I'm going to give this my overall thoughts so let's go! I really enjoyed reading this poem, I felt almost transported to the beach. I do feel you ...
Jun 16, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 10.1
Wesh! It's your friendly neighborhood Professor! This is going to be quick, I have just ran a mile in the dark, so give me a break! You have improved so ...
Jun 14, 2019 -
Re: Broken(song, lyrics)
Wesh, Jade here to review your song. I'm just going to give my overall thoughts. Though I think this is meant to be a slow song, I read it as ...
Jun 13, 2019 -
Re: These New Ashes- Chapter One
Wesh! I'm Professor Jade and I'm just going to give this a quick review. Let's go! Let me start with what I enjoyed: The characters all sound like their own ...
Jun 11, 2019 -
Re: Universe
Wesh, so I'm Jade and I'll just be giving this my overall thoughts. If you want me to elaborate on anything I say then please tell me. I love the ...
Jun 11, 2019 -
Re: Haiku: Daring
Wesh! I know this is old but I manged to stumble across it so I'm going to try to critique it. Yeah, I know this is old and you probably ...
Jun 9, 2019 -
Re: I'm a Writer-Poem about loving your passion more then yourself
Wesh! This is Professor JadeLotus and I think this poem shines! No, seriously, I think it's pretty hard-hitting and relatable. Maybe check the flow, add stanzas and definitely consider trying ...
Jun 9, 2019 -
Re: Never Never Land (for my Peter Pan)
Wesh! I'm Jade. I know this is sooo old but I found it and I'm going to just give it my overall thoughts. Pretty good! I liked the whimsical theme. ...
Jun 8, 2019
