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Re: no difference between love and hate
Hi! Ladybug here to leave you a review :) I really liked this poem, you have such a display of raw emotion and imagery here, which is really interesting and ...
Apr 16, 2025 -
Re: the third law of motion
Hi! Ladybug here to review your poem. Ok! To start with my overall thoughts: I really love the concept of this, it comes from such an interesting place with the ...
Apr 16, 2025 -
Re: i can feel the heart breaking as one
I love the imagery in this poem! The mix of showing emotion through thoughts of spring, water, and everyday objects hs such a good juxtaposition and contrasts so well. Normally, ...
Mar 4, 2025 -
Re: Non-Fiction or Fiction?
Hello Libby! Jade here to leave you a quick review. I loved this short little book, it had a good, unique hook to it. I love fiction, and I believe ...
Sep 30, 2022 -
Re: hurricane
hEY CRAWLBOSS! Jade here to review your prose poem.. i love the imagery of this piece; hurricanes are such a good metaphor for emotions, with the eye of the storm ...
Sep 29, 2022 -
Re: Lily-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies
Hi Vampire! I really liked this story, especially the bittersweet end to it. It feels like your writing has grown a lot these past few months, and I really like ...
Sep 28, 2022 -
Re: Lipstick
Hi crawlboss, Jade here to leave a short review on your cute short story, Lipstick. I really liked the plot twist, but I wish you had more buildup to it ...
Sep 27, 2022 -
Re: Poem
Hi Liberty! Jade here to leave you a short review on your poem. Your title was strange but it caught my attention! I love the flow of the stanzas, and ...
Sep 26, 2022 -
Re: why hide
Hi TrinityPoeting, Jade here to leave you a short review on your old (but cute!) poem. Let's get straight into it. Stanza one: you're spitting facts. Though the flow feels ...
Sep 25, 2022 -
Re: what to write?
Hey Lib! Jade here to give you a short review on your work! I really liked this poem; not only was it relatable, but it played into lots of different ...
Sep 24, 2022 -
Re: Fear and Confidence
Hi Libby! Jade here to give you a short review! I like this poem in its entirety, I think it's well written, the stanzas are pleasing and the poem is ...
Sep 23, 2022 -
Re: The Ants That Made Me Smile
Hi Libby, this poem was adorable! I'm here to give it a quick review. The opening two lines were beautiful! I like how you spelt out the word happy, it's ...
Sep 22, 2022 -
Re: The Bisexual Sonnet of Jason Yilfein
Hello Kelisot! Jade here to leave a review. I was really interested in a poem from a character's point of view, and I very much enjoyed it! I like the ...
Sep 20, 2022 -
Re: Satire in 'But I'm A Cheerleader'
Hello! As someone who loves this movie and as someone who likes to look at old articles on YWS, I thought this would be the perfect thing to read. Let ...
Sep 20, 2022 -
Re: pointing fingers
Hi Gem! Hannah here to review your lovely poem. Let's go ahead and get started! Starting with the format, I like how some lines are more blurry than others, I ...
Sep 20, 2022
