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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: no difference between love and hate

    Hi! Ladybug here to leave you a review :) I really liked this poem, you have such a display of raw emotion and imagery here, which is really interesting and ...

    Apr 16, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the third law of motion

    Hi! Ladybug here to review your poem. Ok! To start with my overall thoughts: I really love the concept of this, it comes from such an interesting place with the ...

    Apr 16, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i can feel the heart breaking as one

    I love the imagery in this poem! The mix of showing emotion through thoughts of spring, water, and everyday objects hs such a good juxtaposition and contrasts so well. Normally, ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Non-Fiction or Fiction?

    Hello Libby! Jade here to leave you a quick review. I loved this short little book, it had a good, unique hook to it. I love fiction, and I believe ...

    Sep 30, 2022
  • Other » Literature, Other Re: hurricane

    hEY CRAWLBOSS! Jade here to review your prose poem.. i love the imagery of this piece; hurricanes are such a good metaphor for emotions, with the eye of the storm ...

    Sep 29, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Lily-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hi Vampire! I really liked this story, especially the bittersweet end to it. It feels like your writing has grown a lot these past few months, and I really like ...

    Sep 28, 2022
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Lipstick

    Hi crawlboss, Jade here to leave a short review on your cute short story, Lipstick. I really liked the plot twist, but I wish you had more buildup to it ...

    Sep 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Poem

    Hi Liberty! Jade here to leave you a short review on your poem. Your title was strange but it caught my attention! I love the flow of the stanzas, and ...

    Sep 26, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: why hide

    Hi TrinityPoeting, Jade here to leave you a short review on your old (but cute!) poem. Let's get straight into it. Stanza one: you're spitting facts. Though the flow feels ...

    Sep 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: what to write?

    Hey Lib! Jade here to give you a short review on your work! I really liked this poem; not only was it relatable, but it played into lots of different ...

    Sep 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Fear and Confidence

    Hi Libby! Jade here to give you a short review! I like this poem in its entirety, I think it's well written, the stanzas are pleasing and the poem is ...

    Sep 23, 2022
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Ants That Made Me Smile

    Hi Libby, this poem was adorable! I'm here to give it a quick review. The opening two lines were beautiful! I like how you spelt out the word happy, it's ...

    Sep 22, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Satire Re: The Bisexual Sonnet of Jason Yilfein

    Hello Kelisot! Jade here to leave a review. I was really interested in a poem from a character's point of view, and I very much enjoyed it! I like the ...

    Sep 20, 2022
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Satire in 'But I'm A Cheerleader'

    Hello! As someone who loves this movie and as someone who likes to look at old articles on YWS, I thought this would be the perfect thing to read. Let ...

    Sep 20, 2022
  • Poetry » Health, Culture Re: pointing fingers

    Hi Gem! Hannah here to review your lovely poem. Let's go ahead and get started! Starting with the format, I like how some lines are more blurry than others, I ...

    Sep 20, 2022


Who overcomes by force, hath overcome but half his foe.
— John Milton (Poet)