LacyRayne

Okay so this is so creepy! Which is obviously why I love it! My favorite part in this piece was "come little children, abandon they fear". It was very powerful ...

Okay I love this poem. It's short and sweet and to the point. I feel like you hit the message spot on, there's nothing more to be said. My favorite ...

Hello there! I really love this poem, it gives us that pop of reality we all need. However, I do not agree with the person below me, I feel like ...

Woah. When I heard the name I never thought you would portray betrayal as a man. It caught me off guard but it's such a good decision. I feel like ...

Well hello there! First things first, the name is what caught my attention. Obviously because of Mr. Edgar Allen Poe. But this piece was really good. It was beautiful yet ...

I love your writing style, I couldn't find any errors, so that's good. My favorite line is probably "then your name will be my last breath." I can't really find ...

Woah. That's all I can say. You are so amazing, you have a true talent. This piece was phenomenal! I love how while I was reading it, I began to ...

Hi! Lacy here to review(: The first think I want to say is WOW! This poem gave me chills. Your writing is so amazing and you have so much talent! ...

Lacy Rayne here to review(: WOW. This poem is so amazing! You put so much emotion into it! I only have a few nit picks here and there, first, the ...

Hello! Lacy Rayne here(: This poem was disturbing, but in a "i loved it" kind of way. The only thing I have to say is that the poem did not ...

I really liked the beginning of this poem. Then you started talking about Skyrim, dont get me wrong, its a good game but really? This poem had A LOT MORE ...

Lacy Here(: Okay, I honestly loved this! The structure is very easy to follow and the story is unpredictable. I like that in the end you revealed that the monster ...

Hey, Lacy here! First, let me tell you how much I LOVED this poem! Its so beautiful. My best friend is in the closet and he's too scared to come ...

Hey there! Lacy here to review(: First of all, I love that you wrote about vampires, I'm a big fan! What I really love love loved about this piece is ...

WOW. Thats really all I have to say, I mean you are so talented! Each one of these poems are so different, yet so alike! They're amazing, It really shows ...