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Re: Watching the Moon
Hey there! What a lovely poem, I think it beautifully captures a sense of steadfastness and determination in the speaker, while also discussing the beauty and sereneness of the moon. ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: All I want ♥
Hey there! It's been a very long time since I wrote a review so bear with me:) I love how your poem conveys this sense of yearning: of wanting to ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: Almost Audrey, Prologue - Nicodemus.
Hey, Lunar Girl here with a review! Hope you are doing well. Let's get started. First Impressions: It took me a while to realize that the story is written from ...
Oct 18, 2022 -
Re: i wish my youth would last just one heartbeat longer
Hey, LunarGirl here! Just wanted to say that I was immediately ensnared by the title of your poem. It really resonated with me and I thought it brought out a ...
Oct 17, 2022 -
Re: daily task lists
Hey, hope you're doing well! Just wanted to say that I love the unique formatting you used for your poem. It is very true that life functions around routines and ...
Oct 17, 2022 -
Re: Selling happiness
Hey, Lunar Girl here with a review! It has been a long time since I have written a review, but I was intrigued by the title of your story so ...
Oct 16, 2022 -
Re: Prologue
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it! It’s been a week since we moved in and things are going as they usually do. Mom is finishing ...
Mar 8, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 3
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Sadly, despite the war, there was still school. So, when she woke up in the morning Raymie had to ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: MTOHS - Chapter 2.1
Hello, LUNAR here with a review! Let's get straight to it. I woke to what sounded like a small tremor in my bedroom, with paintings seeming to rattle against the ...
Feb 4, 2021 -
Re: Hereissa: Prologue
Hello, LUNAR here with a review! Let's get straight to it. “Where is she, Fabian?” Zelina Nȃthar, the leader of the Phorean Dynasty, demanded, pacing around the throne room with ...
Feb 4, 2021 -
Re: The Shadow
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review, and a belated welcome to YWS!!! Let's get straight to it. The morning sun rose as dawn began to take form. It felt as ...
Feb 3, 2021 -
Re: The Other Side: Prologue
Hello, LUNARGRIL here with a review! Before I start my review I would just like to say, WELCOME TO YWS!!! Let's get straight to it. 1st December 2014 Isn't there ...
Feb 3, 2021 -
Re: Woman in Baerenschanze
Hello, LUNARGIRL back with a review! Let's get straight to it. She arrived, then, with small steps, vertical. She must have been more than 1.80 m tall and her feet ...
Feb 3, 2021 -
Re: Prologue
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. This is a very interesting and intriguing prologue. I love your use of description and detail in this, it ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: Farewell in Jaegerstrasse
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let me just say, welcome to YWS! Let's get straight to it. Once or twice a week I would come across this middle-aged couple, ...
Feb 2, 2021