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LUNARGIRL

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Watching the Moon

    Hey there! What a lovely poem, I think it beautifully captures a sense of steadfastness and determination in the speaker, while also discussing the beauty and sereneness of the moon. ...

    Nov 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: All I want ♥

    Hey there! It's been a very long time since I wrote a review so bear with me:) I love how your poem conveys this sense of yearning: of wanting to ...

    Nov 12, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Almost Audrey, Prologue - Nicodemus.

    Hey, Lunar Girl here with a review! Hope you are doing well. Let's get started. First Impressions: It took me a while to realize that the story is written from ...

    Oct 18, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: i wish my youth would last just one heartbeat longer

    Hey, LunarGirl here! Just wanted to say that I was immediately ensnared by the title of your poem. It really resonated with me and I thought it brought out a ...

    Oct 17, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: daily task lists

    Hey, hope you're doing well! Just wanted to say that I love the unique formatting you used for your poem. It is very true that life functions around routines and ...

    Oct 17, 2022
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Selling happiness

    Hey, Lunar Girl here with a review! It has been a long time since I have written a review, but I was intrigued by the title of your story so ...

    Oct 16, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Prologue

    Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it! It’s been a week since we moved in and things are going as they usually do. Mom is finishing ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 3

    Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Sadly, despite the war, there was still school. So, when she woke up in the morning Raymie had to ...

    Feb 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: MTOHS - Chapter 2.1

    Hello, LUNAR here with a review! Let's get straight to it. I woke to what sounded like a small tremor in my bedroom, with paintings seeming to rattle against the ...

    Feb 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Hereissa: Prologue

    Hello, LUNAR here with a review! Let's get straight to it. “Where is she, Fabian?” Zelina Nȃthar, the leader of the Phorean Dynasty, demanded, pacing around the throne room with ...

    Feb 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Shadow

    Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review, and a belated welcome to YWS!!! Let's get straight to it. The morning sun rose as dawn began to take form. It felt as ...

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Other Side: Prologue

    Hello, LUNARGRIL here with a review! Before I start my review I would just like to say, WELCOME TO YWS!!! Let's get straight to it. 1st December 2014 Isn't there ...

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Woman in Baerenschanze

    Hello, LUNARGIRL back with a review! Let's get straight to it. She arrived, then, with small steps, vertical. She must have been more than 1.80 m tall and her feet ...

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Prologue

    Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. This is a very interesting and intriguing prologue. I love your use of description and detail in this, it ...

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Farewell in Jaegerstrasse

    Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let me just say, welcome to YWS! Let's get straight to it. Once or twice a week I would come across this middle-aged couple, ...

    Feb 2, 2021


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