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hahaha thank you for your review I needed a good laugh today. I will do my best to fix the things you pointed out.

It was a little slow at the beginning but picked up as you went along which I loved. This was a magnificently written piece so thank you for that. Gerard ...

I think is a very eloquently written poem.I can't help but feel like there should be more to it. Imagery is something left to the imagination which is much different ...

I'd like to start off by saying that this piece evoked great sadness towards the end, but was very touching to say the least. I would also like to say ...

I think the message of wanting to go back and undo something that we've done wrong or chosen the wrong thing is something everyone can understand. I also agree with ...

As the others have pointed out it is a very romantic poem, but I felt like it was unfinished.

I would like to start off by saying despite some grammatical errors the news cast is what made me take an interest in the story. It gives what I feel ...

an excellent piece of work. Very powerful and honest it makes one think about the way I felt if I lost someone.

I really like the description of the knights in the first part but after that I didn't really get that on the rest of the story. I wasn't really sure ...

I think that is a very interesting take on temptation an d how it affects people. And the description was fantastic

I agree with Nance, Drew even if he does feel remorse something about him seems off... maybe I'm just being paranoid for her. So please ignore my comment on the ...

This is a very unique story and I like the authenticity of your story. It was a privilege to read it. I'm interested to see why Ira was so evil ...

As you know I love your stories. I miss seeing and reading your stuff.

Okay first off I want to say I really love the way you described the concert and atmosphere. The guy that came into is a seemingly interesting character and explained ...

like smanda14 said it is very hard to say where this is going and it feels as if it is only an introduction and I would like to see a ...