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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: good day !

    This is such a beautiful poem. Correct me if I am wrong, but it feels like the mc is finding who she really is in order not to change into ...

    May 31
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Crush...?

    Hello, I know how to feels to not know if what you are feeling is a crush forming, or if you are simply just having platonic feelings. It is very ...

    Oct 24, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: ***

    I read the last poem and I will say absolutely wonderful. We do make assumptions in our everyday lives even with simple things such as what words mean. One line ...

    Jun 12, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Has it ever occurred to you?...

    I love this. I love how at the start of the poem The narrator is perfectly at peace with themselves and happy with how they are, they go a stable ...

    Jun 12, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Suffocation

    Love it. This beautifully portrays the feeling of being trapped and stuck. How your feelings can suffocate you. overall hoping that you will find peace at some point. "Yesterday's dreams ...

    Jun 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Questions That keeps ME up

    Amazing. I love how well things portrays overthinking (What its most likely about). The constant never ending questions, not just about the world around you but also about you. kind ...

    Jun 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: fake it till you make it

    I love this. It is so raw and real. intrusive thoughts are such a hard thing to deal with, trying to push the thoughts away with reassurance that nobody is ...

    Jun 11, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When the World Ends (aka: a love letter to friendship)

    Hello! I love expressing my love for friends through words. You portray that well, I can tell you feel a deep connection to your friend and love them very much. ...

    Jun 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: There Are Stars

    Love this. The numbness you feel that persists sucks. but looking around the room you see the things that you made makes you realize that this is you're place it's ...

    Jun 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Happy.

    I love this poem. "If the relentless grip of sorrow finally let go, Would you leap into the unknown, Or cower in the familiar dark?" this part is relatable on ...

    Jun 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: ​A Mental Push And One Cut

    I love when a poem has such raw unfiltered feelings in it to the point where you can feel them radiating off the poem. This poem is really well written, ...

    Jun 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Don't Fear the Reaper

    I like how you use old English but it is in a way that we can still understand what you are saying. I love how you make death neutral, because ...

    Jun 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Pull me under the wave and trap me in silence

    Hello, this was a very good read. the way I interpreted it is that this is explaining what your experience with bipolar disorder is like considering you mention mania and ...

    Nov 16, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: "dear god" by Xaney

    Hello, this poem was an emotional read. even so it was good. what I gathered from this poem was that within this family the "rebellious" child is the child who ...

    Jul 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Ano Ang Guro? (What is A Teacher?)

    Hello! This poem was really short and sweet. Typically longer poems are nice but when you can write a poem short and still have its message come out and have ...

    Jun 10, 2024


A man hears what he wants to hear and disregards the rest.
— Paul Simon