KnightlyAngel09

I think it's insane how much people love twilight. Edward and Bella are both obssessed freaks. Breaking Dawn was just plain disgusting. Yes, my dears, I actually read the whole ...

Hello. I'm Knightly, nice to meet ya.:D This poem is beautiful. Your imagery as the others have said is vivid and breathtaking. A good poem raises emotions in a reader ...

Hello, I'm Knightly.:) Nice to meet ya.:) Welcome to YWS. I love, love, love this.:) Starred. before my review on this, there are some rules on the site. You have ...

Hello.:) Nice to meet ya. I'm Knightly. Writer's block. hate it. same dilemma at the moment. hahaha.:) Well, first of all, I suggest that you capitalize letters that need be ...

Star light, Star bright, First star I see tonight. I wish I may, I wish I might, Have the wish I wish tonight. Hey.:) First, I suggest you put the ...

Hello.:D Moulin Rouge eh? I have to see that film again. Our passion was so alive, We were happy and naive, The things around so colorful, Our hearts were beating ...

Hello, hello.:) I've seen you around the poetry forums quite a lot but I think it shall be the first time I shall review anything by you so first, nice ...

Hello, hello.:) I'm Knightly, nice to meet ya. I'm not very good at reviewing works, honestly. Often, I just give my impression of the work, as a common reader and ...

Hey Shina.:) Well, this poem meant two things to me.:) First, did you read any Enid Blyton books when you were younger? She has a lot of stories about toys ...

BF, pretty.:) haha. I love this. Flows so pretty pa. Like a heartbeat when you read it. Although in the last part 'more than they thought they should'. Should connotes ...

Hello. Second to the last stanza: fare should be fair Haha. I'm not sure if you are using reverse psychology or you aren't confident about this work but honestly, I ...

This is a lovely, lovely poem. It reminds me of Stevenson's poetry. Pretty and sweet and beautiful, beautiful imagery. The ending is as Galerius says, quaint and pretty. oh, I've ...

hello.:) Brilliant, brilliant. I absolutely loved this. I agree with June. It does have and Edgar Allan Poe feel to it. Sort of like Annabel Lee. Another poet this reminds ...

Hey darko.:) I haven't seen you around the site much lately. Anyway, on to the review. They come and go - trains: [s]with[/s] leaving no mark, [s]with[/s] leaving no stains, ...

Hello.:) For a poem with a really powerful image, as in lightning and thunder and destruction, I found it rather weak. The reason is that the words you use are ...