KnightlyAngel09

Hello.:) This is beautiful. I love how you personified the changing of the seasons, likened them to the expressions on a person's face. And also how you turned the gestures ...

It's a beautiful poem. I really loved reading this. curled up at the window sill, ghosts— each a small piece of you— fall from parted lips and rest on the ...

Rena, it's in Filipino.:) Well, there's a lot of Filipinos on this site but just in case they don't get to see it, I shall try to make a review.:) ...

Hello, hello. I'm Knightly. Nice to meet ya. Let's see. I love your concept. At least the way I understand this is that it's about a loss of feeling for ...

Hello, hello. Interesting story. I like how it's humorous yet rather tragic at the same time. haha, First, who is Mary? Did you randomly shift from 3rd person narrator to ...

Hello. I haven't read a poem by you in a long time. Very interesting concept. This idea of democracy as a form of conformity is explored a lot in prose ...

Hello, hello.:) It's a good piece. Particularly because of how you make the line breaks work for you. The way you broke the lines apart gave it a very 'chat' ...

Hello. Amazing piece, I must say. The first part got me thinking what you were driving at but then by the latter part it cleared out. It's a very new ...

Hey Brendan. Beautiful, beautiful piece. Almost like the chant of nature to me. Your work again, blares out the characteristic strength of your words and imagery. Ok, I know this ...

Hello, hello. Nice to meet ya.:) I'm Knightly. Is this poem religious in essence? Not that it matters though. It just suddenly sprung to my head when I read the ...

Hello, hello.:) Nice to meet ya. First of all, I would suggest you change the title. The title shouts out cliche to the reader. Pain gained, Love lost. It automatically ...

BF!!!:) haha. I have to see you tomorrow. Ok. Review. I shall try. haha. But I love this. Cheers to levelheaded lovers.XD I can’t carry you in my arms forever ...

Hello and welcome here.:) I loved this. The strength of your words is just amazing. Your touch disables my mind-it disarms my sense of right so that even to decide ...

Hello.:) The silence of a generation, Cut off by the nation Of pain, love, and hurt, Rings for miles without once Meeting an ear- Brilliant beginning. It's strong and it ...

Hello.:) Nice to meet ya. Your first poem, yay! Well, first, you need to fix your punctuation. It doesn't help this poem that you have a full stop after each ...