KnightlyAngel09

Hello. I'm Nixie.:) Anyway, on your poem... I wasn't sure wether it was supposed to rhyme in some parts or not at all in the whole poem. It kinda confused ...

Hello.:) I'm Nixie. I read your poem and here's my review.:) Every morning I wake up wishing you were there Every night I go to bed saying the same old ...

Wow. I am in love with the line about time. It was beautiful. The last few lines of the first stanza sounded rather awkward. Overall though the rhyme scheme in ...

To me this seems to be about writing, expressing your thoughts and emotions through writing. That is what I understood at least and felt. I think the words you used ...

Lovely. There's a lyrics section by the way.:) Anyway, I loved this song. The way you used words are absolutely beautiful.:)

My Skin It disguises my feelings. It hides my heart. It covers the nerve you're killing, and sets me apart. I love your opening. It shows no emotion. Can tell ...

Perhaps you should break it down into paragraphs? The storyline also raced right through. It was way too quick. Maybe you should take some more time to develop characters or ...

Woah. I was wondering why the story was absolutely zooming so quickly over meeting and liking and admitting and loving and then turns out it's an outline. Well, anyway, the ...

I didn't write this. The words just stumble out, so... I'm not responsible if this is really, but really bad! :D (getting excuses for being a lousy poet, but this ...

I agree with Scarecrow. I mean, this is a song right? I liked that the poem/song made me understand the situation. Because the language was easy and everything was laid ...

Lovely. Absolutely lovely. It made me patriotic for Finland... Which isn't patriotism but I guess the emotions were just brimming in your poem that I sunk into it's waves. I ...

Befor last night, you were my world. But now it seems like I'm not your girl. She likes you. I guess you like her. She hates me. Yet, you seem ...

You did nothing wrong, yet they show no mercy. They throw brutal strikes against your gentle white skin. What was once the face of my beautiful angel, is now the ...

The blood of life is in the movement, The blood of movement is in the dance. Each shift of an eye tells a story, Woven together in movement's trance. I ...

I love rhyming and you rhyme brilliantly.:) I loved how your poem was vague at the start then clearer at the end. It makes you think for a while then ...