Finland
Oh Finland…
Your soil is where I stand
Oh Finland…
The wonderful place where you can hold the magical, white snow with your bare hand
Oh Finland…
The land with ancient history
Oh Finland…
The deep hallows in your mighty forests will always stay a mystery
I can’t wait to come back to you
I can’t wait to enter the beautiful city Helsinki
I can’t wait to walk on the soil of Turku where the medieval life still wonders
The place where when it snows the whole country with songs and happiness thunders
The place where once mighty Vikings ruled
The place where the glorious Swedish and the undefeatable Russians army's crueld
Oh Finland …
I want to once again to stand and feel huge white cathedral of Helsinki
Oh Finland…
I want to once again walk in the beautiful woods of Vantaa
Oh Finland …
Your soil is where I stand
Oh Finland…
The wonderful place where you can hold the magical, white snow with your bare hand
The land with the mighty seas and rivers
The land with powerful winds that gives us shivers
The land with multi numbers of islands
The land with great and tall highlands
Oh Finland
The land where Christmas lives and grows
Oh Finland
The land where the powerful water flows
Oh Finland
The place with undesirable romance and nature
Oh Finland
The place with folks that are free and have a great stature
Oh Finland….
Soon I will come to you
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So I'm getting the feeling English isn't your first language. If so, WOW. I could never even consider writing in another language from the one I speak in. So great job on that!
Yesterday was alote of snow man. I and Lord Anzius had a snow ball fight! But dude I don't now if you remeber or know the teacher "Hilkka Ow'Doad". She told us that Vikings were in Finland.
Sakura, you stole my favorite phrase
oh well, I guess I shouldn't complain. Finalnd was never ruled by vikings. Well onto the main things; I think the whole first stanza felt awkward, or atleast it did to me.
I think you should write it, instead of is.Oh well, good work fellow
-Regards, the crazy person from 7C
Hi, lordgluman!
I'm not Finnish, but your poem is still pretty good.
Onto the review:
Check your meter. It's a bit off at times if not non-existent.
Crueld? Is that Finnish for something? It's not a word...
This line makes your poem sound like a song in a Disney movie. One where Josh Groban would sing constantly. Ech.
Oh yeah... that's the Polar Express... hmm, I didn't mean to allude to that... anyway...
Water blows? It blows? Really?
The word folks bothers me. Oh well.
Nice job!
-Sakura
I thought the Vikings did rule Finland for a while. Didn't they?
Oh, lordgluzman! Guess where I'm from?
Where when is? What does that mean?
Did they?
Glad you brought that up
Uh, can water blow? Methinks you just tried to make it rhyme, but it doesn't make sense.
Hahaha. If I didn't already live in Finland, I would definitely want to move there now. It was so fun to read this! I was almost hoping to catch some common mistaken thoughts about Finland, but there wasn't any.
You made me feel really happy, thanks for that!
Demeter
xxx
Lovely. Absolutely lovely. It made me patriotic for Finland... Which isn't patriotism but I guess the emotions were just brimming in your poem that I sunk into it's waves. I love how you describe. Your words bring to mind such vivid pictures. Anyway, lovely.
OW mean OUCH! like if you hurt yourself...you might say it
loved the fourth stanza!!
) you made it look as though it was a song when you repeated the first stanza at the end but wrote something different in the beginning. perhaps you could exchange 6th and 8th lines for something thats not already in the poem?
and OH is probably what you meant to say in your poem unless Finland was hurting you. lol
but by the way, great poem!!
but on the fifth stanza, ...um does water really blow in Finland??
you see, in the fourth, you wrote about the wind blowing, and then in the next para. you said the water blew.....
and also, in the third stanza (i know, i know, im getting out of order
just a thought. lol
but i loved the way you made the Finland sound magical, almost making the reader (me, at least) wish they could come with you.
i really liked it!!
I don't know the difference betwenn Ow and OH. Can any body tell me?
OKay, first I think that your flow was a little bit off. Some parts it was great, the other I was like, oh.
Ow? Did you mean oh? Just wondering...
I think that compared to your other poems, it needs some work. Some parts I though you made it into a song, and it threw me off. I mean, It could just be me...
Okay, so now that that's done, I liked the second stanza. Very cool.
Anyways, good job, just not as good as you could do!