KnightlyAngel09

This was really good. Rather confusing though, I must say. I reread it and tried to connect it to the title. Maybe I'm too dense to understand a connection. Anyway, ...

Drawing blood ain't cool. I just got too used to it, I guess that's why I got over the fear of needles thing. Anyway, this is a great poem. I ...

This was really good. And I think that the event Princess was talking about that should have been there, being watched by the statues, is there. All summarized, it is ...

Great rhyme.:) It was off in a few stanzas though. The grammar mistakes have already been pointed out so there's no need to reiterate. Hmm... I really liked this poem. ...

I agree with the stanzas. It'll make it easier to read. Also the punctuation comment.:) This really had feeling but I think you can make it more vivid. Make the ...

Hello.:) Slight technicalities. Honestly don't care much about them but a lot of people do so just to improve the strucuture of this: Er... Let's see. Small problem with the ...

Hello.:) I think that this is a lovely topic to write about. Rather than just human mishaps you know? So for that, this already has great potential. I think that ...

I'm sorry about your friend. This is a beautiful poem. The emotions were all there, all vividly painted. A thousand times I’d find her howling in the night, Pouring her ...

Okay. I wrote a reply and it all disappeared cause the internet died for two seconds. Anyway, here I go again. I hate touchy guys. Especially when you're not at ...

Wow. Really beautiful. Lovely flow. But more than anything, the emotions and message and story in this poem is amazing. You really captured how misunderstood art is by people at ...

Hello.:) I once saw my heart lying on the floor. I think this is a good start but I think that all in all the first eight lines were confusing. ...

Hello.:) And welcome here. Now, to your poem. First, your very first line, it didn't bother me until I got halfway through your poem. I can't take it no more. ...

This is amazing. I find no fault in this, really. There's a tone of desperation and a sudden shift into hope at the end. That was beautiful. But with your ...

Hello. Welcome.:) Now, on to your poem. Your opening was rather bland. It really didn't paint your emotions too well. It said how you felt all right but you said ...

Well, all I can suggest is add some punctuation marks. If you think of the future like a broken piece Waiting to be fixed With time against many a life ...