KnightTeen

The content in this was very good, and I liked your style of writing. The grammar, however, needs some work. You need to capitalize all of your stand-alone 'I's, and ...

I agree with haven235, in the sense that A) the ending is to abrupt and B) there's not enough profanity/mature content in here to warrant an eighteen plus rating. Probably ...

Let's get down to business, shall we? If I had to list these things down it would be in the following way First of all, I thought that in order ...

I thought that this was very funny and engaging, and I enjoyed reading it. There are no grammar or spelling errors as far as I can see. There are only ...

Hey, HT here to review. "no," If you don't mind me asking, why isn't this capitalized? she said, "I am sorry for the world turning and the leaves falling. This ...

This is easily the best part yet. Very few grammar mistakes, and non that weren't typos. I would like to see you break up some of your sentences a bit ...

I like this a lot so far, but there are some things that I would like to mention. 1) We’re all the laughing, blushing, gasping, crying all those other emotions ...

Hey, sorry I didn't do this sooner. First off, is "What comes next," the title of your book. And, "When things begin to fall apart," the beginning of you chapter? ...

I don't really know what to do with this since it can be such a touchy and controversial subject. The Sandy Hook Shooting was a tragedy that shocked the nation, ...

Great as always. As far as I can see, there are no major grammar mistakes to mention. Except maybe this: Eli read nonstop through the week, she didn't even make ...

The formatting/line structure/line spacing is very weird. Was it intentionally written that way? If it was, I would recommend changing it, since such structure is more suited to poetical or ...

Hey, HT here for a review. Since the title is included separate from the work, you don't have to put it in the work. It's kind of redundant to have ...

Wow. This was powerful, and your words rang with truth. The emotion that you used is indescribable, and I doubt that many can match it. You use of language is ...

Yay, you wrote more! I'm so excited to start reviewing! Okay, after reading through this I have to say that you've done an awesome job again! Really awesome. You are ...

Okay, I think that the concept you had (based on what came into my head when I read the title) is brilliant. I think that some of the content that ...