KnightTeen

Wow, this was fun to read, hilarious, and brought me back to when I used to watch Pokémon. Just one thing I would like to point out, Sometimes we hate ...

It's to bad about the blog rights, I'm sorry that you can't post them here. I attempted to go read them, but I was informed of an error in the ...

Hey, HT here for a review. I like this a lot. I like the fact that you have absolutely no grammar mistakes whatsoever, and that you capitalized the first line ...

Hey, HT here to review. It's my first day of school. To my surprise, I was the only transferee in the senior batch. You start out using present tense (is) ...

Hey, HT here for a review. I'm going to start by talking about what I believe you can improve on. Please keep in mind that these are my opinions and ...

Hey, HT here for a review. Overall, I enjoyed reading this. But I would like to make some suggestions to help you improve it even more. Keep in mind that ...

Hey, welcome to YWS. I'm @HomeschooledTeen, here to review your work. Overall, as a whole, I liked this. You clearly write with emotion, and from the heart. Those are good ...

Wow. The Wilcox's (and people like them) are the only reason I'm afraid to admit to people that I'm Christian. They give us a bad name. Overall, I thought it ...

Nice, very funny DSL. However, I think that you could use some punctuation, and there is one grammar mistake. One day i'll get that Batman 'I's are always capitalized when ...

Hey, HT here for a review. Overall, I liked this as a whole, but there were a few little things that I would like to mention. "Wait, scoot over there," ...

I thought that this was pretty good. But your grammar leaves something to be desired. There are several instances where you didn't capitalize where it was necessary, such as at ...

Wow. This is really amazing. But, is there someway that you can delete or remove the large blank areas? They add unnecessary lank to the piece. I love the formatting ...

Hey, HT here to review. You have a really good plot going here, but your appearance and grammar needs some work. In a script, first you introduce the characters. The ...

I loved the title, and I loved the content. Even though it was a little confusing to read the intentionally misspelled words, it was fun to do as well. I'm ...

I'm not really sure how to review this, since it's so short, but I'll do my best. The title is very appropriate, and even though it is a haiku and ...