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Re: Everything Is Just There.
Hello again. People might start to think that I am stalking you, you sure you don't want to get rid of me? This was.......I really don't know what to say ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Please.
Wow. I really don't know what to say about this. I think that I liked it, but since it covers a topic that is somewhat personal to me, I don't ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window
This one is one of my favorites so far. The stanzas are well spaced and even, the rhythm is very good. There were a few instances where the lines were ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: The River Echoed
I'm bbbbaaaacccckkkk! You might end up regretting asking me to review for you, since now you won't be able to get rid of me. I thought that you did very ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: What Makes Your Pajama Loose
Nice. I personally hate One Direction so this is a real thrill for me. (Now, when I say hate, I am referring to their music. I don't think that any ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: women and mother earth (ch-1)
Hi, this is your friendly neighborhood HomeschooledTeen here for a review. Misspellings/Grammar errors We call ourselves incredible in govt advertisement. Maybe, 125 crore population together can’t
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: An Experimentation
I thought that this was fun, as you intended it to be. I've written a lot of reviews today, and while normally I come across maybe one or two words ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Shades: Episode One, Act One "Super Freaks"
Nice script Robbie. Now, before I write this review, you mentioned that you can't space this properly, that the format is giving you trouble. I'm trying to figure out which ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Feelings
I thought that this was very good. It's a little short and could use some more punctuation, such as commas, colons, semi-colons, and periods. However, that is merely me stating ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: The more pain, the easier
I almost don't want to review this, since it seems so personal, but there are a few things that I would like to mention. Your lines are a little long, ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 3
Hello, I'm here to kick this one out of the Green Room. GR Knight at work. All of that stopped one day, no more jokes, no more acting awkwardly with ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 2
Hey, I found chapter three of this when in the Green Room attempting to end the High Volume Alert, but first I had to read the beginning to make sure ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Em. (First Revision)
Hi, HT here to review! He looms in the doorway with an aggregate stone upon his shoulder, facets in the rock facing fracturing as they collect. I have nothing to ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: A graded life
This was really good. The only real problem I have is that I have no idea what the "A's" refer to. I have nothing to do with any sort of ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Disconnected
Wow. This was really good, and I enjoyed reading it a lot. I can personally relate to this poem, since I feel like this a lot, especially when I'm with ...
Sep 6, 2013
