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KnightTeen

The Knight of Teens

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Together

    Hi, Knight Teen of the Green Room Knights here to review. Can I just say that your avatar is epic, by the way. This was........... I don't really know how ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Drained

    This is really good. There are a few things that I would like to mention, however. Some of your words are showing up on my page as links. If you ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: skin and bones.

    Wow. This was really dramatic and powerful. Your use of language to convey what you are saying is astounding. Now, when I say that I mean that you made good ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: The Adventure of a Neko-girl? (part 2)

    EloquentDragon pretty much covered much of what I wanted to say, so I'm not going to repeat any of the grammar mistakes. If English is not your first language, then ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Secret Adventure of a Neko-girl? (part 1)

    Alright, I like your story. It's well thought out, and has a good plot. But there are grammar issues. Clouds envy my fate today. It always shining brightly non-stop when ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: The Case of Disappearing Witness PART 22

    Wow. This was pretty powerful, especially the ending. One thing that does bug me a little is how quickly you switched from the suicide to Moriarty. You just picked it ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Run away, Ray

    Hello, This is really beautiful, and you have my condolences. I don't even want to imagine something like that happening because it is so horrible. The rhyme is, well, I ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: The Case of the Disappearing Witness PART 21

    You didn't tell me! *Runs off to go cry in a corner* "Stay away from Watson or next time I won't be so merciful." I have to say, I like ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: first poem i ever wrote

    Alrighty, Knight Teen of the Green Room Knights here to provide you with a review. Welcome to the site, by the way. At first glance, the biggest issue is that ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Seven Crows

    Ah, my beloved Iggy! I am privileged to be one of the Knights to give you one of your three promised reviews. Now, I have never read the tale, even ...

    Oct 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    One of three from your brothers (or sisters) in arms. Biggest issue: Missed spacing. Watch your fingers when you type, and be sure to go back and check before you ...

    Oct 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Story of the Grave

    This is one of the three reviews that will be given to you be a Green Room Knight. Truth be told, I'm not sure I understand the title. I mean, ...

    Oct 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Fluke Kingdom

    I don't have to introduce myself to you, but this is one of three reviews that you will receive from one of your brothers (or sisters) in arms. In other ...

    Oct 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    Hey, KnightTeen of the Green Room Knights here for a review. As a Christian, I share your point of view on this subject and therefore largely agree with what you ...

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Why do Teenagers link to Social Media

    Hey, I'm Knight Teen of the Green Room Knights here to give you a review. Nitpicking first, general comments after. For us teens, social media is not technology it’s just ...

    Oct 13, 2013


The illiterate of the 21st century will not be those who cannot read and write, but those who cannot learn, unlearn, and relearn.
— Alvin Toffler