KnightTeen

You know, I really like your style of writing. Just saying. A quietness had settled over their bunk when Tora asked that one, simple question: “Do you want to play ...

Just so you know, I'm attacking everything in your portfolio. So don't worry if it looks like spam. I promise it's just me. :) In the French countryside of Normandy, ...

Hey, KnightTeen of the Green Room Knights here to review. Um, clearly the biggest problem is the clear lack of paragraphs. They can be long or short but they help ...

Guess what!?!?! You, fair maiden, are the recipient of my 300th review!!!!! Hi, I'm KnightTeen of the Green Room Knights, here to vanquish this evil beast. Just glancing at this ...

Okay, maybe this isn't the last one. Maybe I was confused. But if it is... HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THIS?!?!?!?! "Just trying to keep you two safe. The ...

Hi! KnightTeen from the Green Room Knights here to give you a review. At first glance, I like it. The title freaked me out a bit (That's just who I ...

Oh my gosh, I can't believe it's almost done! I'm going to cry. Oh, and you totally have to tell me how your dad reacted. Lestrade......Lestrade rarely got any free ...

Hey, Knight Teen of the Green Room Knights here to give you a review. At first glance, this is really good. The verses are all pretty even (it doesn't really ...

Hey Willow! Merry Christmas. I wish I could see your dad's face when you give him this awesome present. Lestrade glared at her harder than he ever had before, and ...

I have to admit, I always feel funny reviewing for people older than I am, even if I have YWS seniority over them. In all honesty, however, I thought that ...

I think that this was very good. Good grammar, spelling, etc. etc. And your narrative is really good. It speaks nothing but the truth, trust me, I know what sibling ...

Hey, I'm KnightTeen here to give you a review. First can I just say welcome to the site. It's always nice to get new members. As for the actual review: ...

You ask people to tear this up, but the truth is that there is really nothing to tear. The piece is wonderfully written with good spelling and grammar, and it ...

Alright, overall, just skimming through this, I get the feeling that it's going to be pretty decent. One major thing that I have seen in the majority of the essays ...

Hey Reise! I thought that this was really powerful. It's short and the narrative gets directly to the point without drawing the content out to much (I've seen people who ...