KiraThePotatoChip

A powerful piece indeed. Kira, stopping here for a review. Can't really say I've lost anyone like this, but the poem does indeed give a good emotional impact. In terms ...

Hey, Kira stopping here for a review! Nice poem, very strange word choices, but it works well for the poem. So, my biggest complaint with the poem; It is very ...

Well, this is something we don't often here. Kira here for a review, let's get started! I'm a fan of the color choices here, and I'm quite pleased to see ...

Well color me intrigued, and allow me to stop here for a review! Very nice imagery compliments the setting very well right off the bat, which is always good, and ...

Heyo, it's me here to review! Wonderful poem, I quite enjoyed it. Now as far as a theme, I feel it gets slightly confusing towards the middle, as it just ...

Hello, this is your resident Black King and collector of Demon Rent, here for a review! So, I really like the imagery you have going on, it's pretty specific yet ...

Hello there, it's the neighborhood realm creator and demon landlord here for a review! Now, I know not a lot of people care for stories about video games, or fanfictions, ...

Hello, hello! Kira here for a review. Now, the work itself is pretty good, so no complaints there! One issue I have is that the title and work aren't closely ...

Ello, it's the resident Realm Creator here for a review! Let me just say that this is one interesting piece. The color of mint was a very interesting choice, it ...

Hey hey hey, it's Kira stopping by for a review. Now, first off, what is written sounds pretty cool, but it's not much, so consider adding to it. Seeing as ...

I do like the base that's here. One thing I noticed is that it's a bit hard to follow. I like the basis you actually have, and you lay out ...

Hello, I'm here to review your work! So, overall the story is very good. Now, I have no complaints about grammar, formatting, length or anything like that, but the transition ...

Hello, here's a review from the Manager of Realms himself. To start, the poem is very nice, short and to the point. I like the message behind it, but I ...

Well, you managed to put into words what an amazing thing books are to have. It always amazed me how humans have evolved on a level where creating worlds that ...

Despite the (what I'm assuming to be a poem) is short, it holds a lot of meaning. Whether your intention was to tell a personal story or convey a feeling ...