KingQueenKnave

No problem. I am happy you have taken my feedback on board.

I am unsure. What is the point of this poem? All I got was a diatrabe on guilt and suffering.

Nice to know you are taking my feedback on board. Fair enough.

You missed the bit where someone gets stoned to death.

I'm still confused. Is this poem making fun of men's rights activists, or feminists strawmanning them? it neither?

An excellent short piece.

Rebellion with barcodes.

Ok. I do not wish to censor your work, even if I disagree with it.

Why aren't children allowed to read my views on God?

You seem to agree with me, but oppose me criticising feminism. That's rather hypocritical, don't you think?

Anti-lovers are those who write off love and are incredibly cynical, yet fall for its trap when they yearn for their one-off encounters to mean more. As for the genre, ...

That was not my intended message. I mean your commentary, i.e. the portion you have now edited out. It was when you explained the meaning of the poem. I would ...

The narrator is me. I am describing what I see.

Thank you for your review. I have amended those chunks- thought they were a bit submissive and apologetic.

Double posted by mistake