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Re: All the things I've never said
Hey LucyTheBrave, I like this poem. I like the repeated "things like telling..." And I really like the ending. I think your flow is off, just a little, maybe you ...
Mon Apr 17, 2017 7:58 pm -
Re: A Small Girl
ya
Mon Apr 17, 2017 7:46 pm -
Re: Forest Fire
I'm bored
Sun Apr 16, 2017 5:37 pm -
Re: A Small Girl
I originally did this on docs and sometimes it would caps it and sometimes it would not. I will remember to check that in the future! Kimmy
Sun Apr 16, 2017 2:39 pm -
Re: Forest Fire
Hi, just saying hi.
Sun Apr 16, 2017 11:15 am -
Re: Death-My friend-Suicide
I am just testing this out because I am wondering if I can review myself, We is me and my friends here. And I AM NOT GOING TO KILL MYSELF! ...
Sun Apr 16, 2017 11:08 am -
Re: Thoughts
Hey, Just want to say straight up that my review is not to hurt your feelings in any way. :) I think you need to pick either the 2nd to ...
Sun Apr 16, 2017 11:02 am -
Re: My Best Friend
Hi, This is a great piece. I really like it and don't have much to say. I like the way you did the lines, some out, some regular (forgot that ...
Sun Apr 16, 2017 10:53 am -
Re: Your Memory
I read this and in the beginning I was in love I cant write a poem or lyrics maybe you could give me tips?
Sun Apr 16, 2017 3:12 am -
Re: Your Memory
I read this and in the beginning I was in love I cant write a poem or lyrics maybe you could give me tips?
Sun Apr 16, 2017 3:02 am -
Re: DELETED
oh wow
Sun Apr 16, 2017 2:37 am -
Re: DELETED
wow
Sun Apr 16, 2017 2:29 am -
Re: DELETED
wow
Sun Apr 16, 2017 2:29 am -
Re: Forest Fire
Steam, Itz me Kimmy, I think this is great your other one is just scary but this is good! a lot of people are going to see this. The flow ...
Sun Apr 16, 2017 2:14 am -
Re: i left.
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Sun Apr 16, 2017 2:10 am
I love this! great
