KimLovesU

Hi, KimLovesU here to review, but first I just want to say: Welcome to YWS! It's great to have a new memeber among us. He is called "Ianto". He takes ...

Hello :) Just before I review, I just wanted to say: Welcome to YWS! Hope you have a wonderful time on this great site :) Anyway... Hello {,} I'm Henry ...

Hello! :) First of all, congratulations on writing this at such a young age. :) I'll review as I read. " Why, hello there. I'm Jasmine Felton, and I am ...

Hi, Overall I like your chapter and and all but I didn't really understand the situation. Was the character robbing a bank? I really have no idea. I also liked ...

irst Paragraph I loved the beginning very interesting and kept me reading, but I found a few mistakes. " I was screaming as loud as anyone has ever herd me ...

Hello! Your poem was so passionate and moving that it made me cry :') I love the way you showed in this small piece that you are worth living and ...

Hello, I really loved this piece. Very mysterious! I'm guessing it's a prologue for a novel you will write later. I just found a few mistakes in your text. I ...

Wow! That chapter is just breathtaking! I have nothing to suggest to you, this piece just blows my mind. Things I loved: -The way you developed the character. He is ...

Wow, this is very a nice start. The setting is well detailed, you introduced the (I think) main character and the sub characters. The only thing I don't really get ...

I absolutely love the prologue! I have so many questions that I bet could be answered in your story which is great. A prologue isn't supposed to be a chapter, ...

I like the beginning of the chapter when you described what she was doing and where she was which started the story in an interesting way, that's great. But after ...