Kelpies

AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I bet that I look quite frazzled.

Well chapter two is here! Just wanted to say that.

Cool!

Never mind! It will be out within the next couple days. I don't have enough points.

Thanks for the review! And I learned about Sulkies from The Island of Roan Inish (or something like that) And that is also the movie I got my name (in ...

No prob.

Well, quite impressive. And quite imaginative. I love that yellow is happiness, but what about the bluebird of happiness? Please educate me on that one. And what is orange? I ...

Yes, I (roughly) know the rules of chess and have played about three times in my life.

I love all the mystery. What is the competition about? Keep going so all us readers can find out. Why is he not expected to be happy? I would like ...

EPIC!

BOO TO LAB TESTING! Ok, maybe to test a medicine that would save millions of lives, but not for things like shampoo! I am mad just thinking about it! Sorry, ...

Yea, it did in the next chapter!

How in the world will they be able to go on? How many cats must die at the hands of the exterminator? This is like, a major climax. Have to ...

OH MY GLOB!

I know, a nine chapter short story. I worked on this for a year; but it still needs improvement. Please feel free to review. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.