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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight:Chapter Two

    I have read it. I can't remember if I commented on it or not... XD I do remember it though!

    Thu Jul 13, 2017 8:42 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Tears of Fire- Chapter one.

    Hi! Thanks for the review. Truth is I barely remember writing this. I don't remember where I was going with it, and I'm fairly certain I never finished it. I ...

    Mon Feb 13, 2017 11:30 pm
  • Script » Realistic, General Re: Life and Death

    Oh look at me I forgot that I wrote this XD. Thanks for the support!

    Sun Dec 11, 2016 12:19 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Winter Sniper- Prologue (Title pending...)

    Most of that should be cleared up in chapter 1- also from Winter's point of view even though she's kind of dead. No this isn't a "Guardians" fanfic- which will ...

    Tue Sep 06, 2016 5:59 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What is Life?

    Thanks!

    Wed Feb 10, 2016 3:05 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What is Life?

    You're doing fine! Welcome to YWS!

    Wed Feb 10, 2016 3:04 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What is Life?

    The touch the character wants is the touch of society, acceptance. We'll win the crown, as in questioners will finish with the upper hand. I appreciate your review.

    Wed Feb 10, 2016 3:02 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Labyrinthian Mind- Chapter 1

    Thanks! This helped a lot. About her character though, it's supposed to surface gradually, because she's really trying to hide who she is.

    Sun Jan 31, 2016 2:25 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Society's Pruning

    Hehe, thanks!

    Fri Aug 07, 2015 9:37 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Why are Tears So Beautiful?

    Thank you. :)

    Wed Jul 22, 2015 6:09 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Why are Tears So Beautiful?

    I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

    Wed Jul 22, 2015 6:09 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Why are Tears So Beautiful?

    Wow, thanks so much! :D

    Wed Jul 22, 2015 6:08 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Why are Tears So Beautiful?

    *Raises hand guiltily as well* Thanks for the review!

    Wed Jul 22, 2015 1:56 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Why are Tears So Beautiful?

    Thanks for the review! I'll keep that in mind.

    Wed Jul 22, 2015 1:36 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Why are Tears So Beautiful?

    Thank you, I corrected the 'precious' error. And I made the punctuation stronger where you suggested, although I hope you don't mind that I didn't find a period quaint.

    Wed Jul 22, 2015 1:10 am


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