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Hello Calley, This is a wonderful piece, though it sounds like you trying to make sense of the situation, to put it to words. I find Young Writers Society a ...

Hello TheWriter13 Scare me boo! This is really creepy. Now I'm scared of the rafters of my house. As if I wasn't already curious about what looked like a passageway ...

Hello CuriosityCat, Though this is not true to the myth, I could see how it could happen. It brings tears to my eyes to read, I can only imagine what ...

Hello porcupinestrongwill, One thing I can't find... Chapter 8. I'm just wondering where it was. Otherwise, it's wonderful, a nice resolution, but there are still a couple loose ends, I'm ...

Hello porcupinestrongwill, Seems as if you needed the break up to cause a chain reaction, my mistake. And I sense a lot of drama coming. I also sense another explanation ...

Hello porcupinestrongwill! The last part is so funny! Wait... Who is Vanessa? I guess if she made up a fake name then that would lead him to conclude that one ...

Hello porcupinestrongwill! Sorry I took soooooooooo long! I'll make up for it. First off, was that a break up I just read? They seemed pretty close. But I was thinking ...

Hello MarbleToast! I found this absolutely hilarious! Quite comedic, especially the end, and the part about the rotten molar. But if was the customer, I would have used the fact ...

Hello anonomousx, This is making me cry, I can almost not review this. Having someone who doesn't care what you look like... Those are really rare. I'm one of those ...

Hello Chaotic Love! This gets more and more intriguing! Yea sure it has a couple curse words, but it's totally worth it! I found two errors, but neither of them ...

Hello Chaotic Romance! I know, I shouldn't be reading this, but it was totally worth it! On a quick note: Won't she turn into a vampire after being bitten? Or ...

Hello PinkPanda123, First off, this is wonderful! If you just adjusted some things, it would be perfect. No mean comments here, just a couple pointers. It would look more like ...

Hello r4p17! First of all, Dragons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD. Sure, in some stories they ravage the land, in others they're the heroes. Either way, they're pretty cool. Anyway, the quality of this ...

Hello r4p17, sorry I'm so late. First off, this was great! I like how you made it so there are pretty much two sort of rivals, and a peacemaker. It ...

Hello methir123! I absolutely love this piece! I listened to the song, and now I love it even more so. And in some ways, I can relate. Pieces you can ...