Kelpies

Hi Kanome! For one, I think this is a wonderful way to explain it. But when I see the word "Addiction", I usually think of it as a bad thing. ...

I am almost crying, it's so sad. It's like you were there, or it was a family story. I really like this last paragraph. "She gasped for her last breath, ...

Hola Brunnera! I really like this piece, it has a flow that really feels good to read. I also like how you put that she needed that freedom, to be ...

I like it! Short, sweet, to the point. I also like how you said "absolutely nothing is going through my mind to help me with writing". I often feel like ...

Wow. I am impressed. I suppose circumstances would harden Elsa's heart so... But it's still surprising. I wouldn't be surprised if Disney actually took the one you wrote and added ...

I like it! A whole lot more detail, now I understand what the previous piece was about. I only have one thing to poke you about: "I dint understand what ...

I like it! It's creepy. But there must have been more to why she killed her own brother. Of course, this is sometimes what siblings dream of doing to each ...

I like it! It's like what I used to write. I only have a couple nitpicks, so please bear with me. Minor capitalization error: "I wish I could...i don't know." ...

I like how you explained what you did with the poems, I would have read the said poems as to give you a better review, but they are rated beyond ...

Hi! Kelpies here for a review. It's funny! At first it is like your classic romance, then it turns out to be a burrito. Was it spicy? Was it a ...

I'm almost crying after that. I really like it, the emotion it conveys is... I can't find the words. It's beautiful. The emotion put into it, you can tell that ...

*sniffs. It's wonderful! Are you sure that this is your first song?! I haven't even read the rest of the series! I might read the rest of it after reading ...

It's beautiful. I may not see the rhythm the same as you, but it's still beautiful. I can't find the words to explain it, which is a rare case for ...

I think this would be a nice beginning (or end) for a novel. I like it, it's mysterious, dramatic, and Fantasy. I'm not sure if capitalization is very important in ...

Really good, I look forward to reading the next chapter. However, I did find some mistakes. "reasons.he" did you mean "reasons the"? "straight…the" "lunch…so…yeah." Some minor capitalization err